Opinion Needed

[mariesmummy]

Hi

Could anyone have a quick look at an ad which I have put together? the copy deadline is monday and I woudl like a couple of opinions (and pointing out of any spelling mistakes !!)

Thanks in advance.

[Netty]

Yes ..... err, where is it? :P

[Macaroni]

Point us in the right direction Lisa

[mariesmummy]

oh b*gger it - I did ask it too attach, but I bet that it is too big!

Here is the link (I have had to reduce the file size a bit) The AD! (http://www.breastfeedingandbabywearing.co.uk/1_4pagebfandbwadd.jpg)

This is what happen when you stay up late doing an ad and cooking for a barbeque. (not the meat, but the veggie stuf, and making coleslaw etc.) :P

Thanks again!

[Macaroni]

I like it!

Maybe the bottom half wording could be a bit more spaced though. More like the top half but a smaller font?!!

[Ravenfire]

Looks good to me. :happy72: The only problem with spacing the bottom is that you will end up with a huge ad. I agree that if you decide to change the bottom at all it should be a slightly smaller font.

[Azzi]

It looks fine to me , if anything perhaps trying to have a little less in the bottom half

[mariesmummy]

Basically my bottom is too big!! :D reminds me of a post on the weight loss forum.

Seriously, thanks for the feedback.

[Bunny]

It looks great, I love the colours but I agree with the other that a smaller font would be better for the bottom part of it

[babybiz]

Bit late but I agree with the others the top had me reading but the bottom was too busy. Good luck with the ad, hope it brings in lots of business :D :happy72:

[antonia]

looks lovely - only bit that read a bit oddly was 'the' new mum and 'the' breastfeeding mum....think you could be less formal and just say new mums, breastfeeding mums

hth....and hope you and the not-so-new addition are doing well

Antonia