Feedback on Banner Design

[magsite]

I just had this banner put together to advertise my new 3 Issues for £3 range of magazines.

http://www.magsite.co.uk/mag3for3468x60.gif (http://www.magsite.co.uk/store/3-issues-for-3-magazine-offers/info_38.html)

Can I have any feedback from you, should I change or keep it?

Thanks

[Bunny]

I love the look of it

[magsite]

Please check it again, should say some other stuff also. (updated it with full file lol)

[Bunny]

still looking good, it's straight to the point and I love all the magazines in the background in it

[Lemon]

I think it looks good, I like the mags in the background too. Only one thing I am not sure about "Then you'll love what Magsite have". Doesn't read quite right to me.

[Tanya]

I like it although I agree with Lemon about the wording and it might be better if it said 'then you'll love what Magsite has to offer' or 'then you'll love what Magsite have to offer'

[MrTempleDene]

it's great, looks great, but...

(there's always a but)

I think it needs a little longer on the last bit, before it starts to repeat, to give people time to absorb the actual offer.

[MerrilyMe]

Yeah, it needs to be has, i think... trying to remember how to conjugate a verb, i have, you have, he, she or it has - i think that's right!

[littlesheep]

Agree with them!

[funkydorydawn]

I like it - very effective!

Can you just put 'Then you'll love Magsite'?

[Millymoosmum]

I love it - I think 'Then you'll love Magsite' - suggested above. It flows better and is more snappy!

Well done though - it looks great!